My favourite story was Fireworks it is about a family go's to a firework display and they took Sausage's,bread and tomato sauce .There was rides it was packed of people there ate a sausage with bread and tomato sauce.The family sat on top of they car and was watching the fireworks there was one firework then two.The first firework was a green then yellow and red with a little bit of pink.
In my story is when they were on top of there car there were wearing a blanket and woolen hat.The fireworks was so loud and his family 2 of his family member went to sleep but him an someone else where awake and they watched it all.
Lastly when it was time for the fireworks to all go the fireworks were all in a circle and. It was three people that lit them all and when they all went.The firework looked like a rainbow in the sky and it blew the sky full of colors and it looked so nice.
When the toitoi came I was really excited to read the new toitoi book and the stories were amazing.
In my story is when they were on top of there car there were wearing a blanket and woolen hat.The fireworks was so loud and his family 2 of his family member went to sleep but him an someone else where awake and they watched it all.
Lastly when it was time for the fireworks to all go the fireworks were all in a circle and. It was three people that lit them all and when they all went.The firework looked like a rainbow in the sky and it blew the sky full of colors and it looked so nice.
When the toitoi came I was really excited to read the new toitoi book and the stories were amazing.
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